Ice Scream

I'm trying to practice some different faces the HTF characters makes, practicing it on Hunter. For some reason, something just don't seem correct about her face. I'm still practicing the style of HTF, so can someone try helping me out? Or am I just imagining things?
(btw, those scars on the tip of her tongue is there purposely. lol)

Since chocolate ice cream is my favorite flavor, I decided to let Hunter the hare have some too. I know, I drew Mime suckish. ; Ignore him, I just had to choose ANYONE except that iced guy. e_e; -forgot his name- Started with a 'M' right? Now that I think of it, this is the first time I ever drew Mime before. It's no wonder he doesn't look too much like himself.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy this picture, and help me out on any ways I can improve to get close to the HTF style >__<

made in MS Paint

Hunter the hare belongs to me
Mime belongs to Mondo Media